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Lady Hobbs
10-23-2007, 12:03 PM
Today I miss my angels
So stately and so fine
I wished for just a couple
But I ended up with nine.

My house now seems so empty
As I look around the room
No angels wings to greet me
Perhaps they went too soon?

Their aggression drove me crazy
With many tanks to buy
But now that they are gone
I just want to cry.
Nautilus291
10-23-2007, 12:19 PM
great poem!!!
AquaQueen
10-23-2007, 03:53 PM
OMG Hobbs that is a good poem. Obviously you wrote it, and your pretty darn good at it too. You poor thing, I feel for you, I know how hard it was for us to get rid of our Dempsey's so I can sympathise with you. Maybe if you got just one this time...things wouldn't be so bad?? I feel so sad for you and hope you feel better and aren't missing them so much real soon.
CAF
10-23-2007, 04:05 PM
While thou might miss
Those angels who
Thought to kiss

They are now gone
To a good home
And that is no con.

It allows to you to breathe
Without fear and trepidation.
You no longer need to seethe.

Hobbsy, take a chance
You get to now relax.
So be happy and do your little dance!
AquaQueen
10-23-2007, 04:15 PM
Nice one Caf...kinda confuzzled me with the three liners...I didn't get it until I read it out loud...hahaha...I feel like I'm having a blond day today...lol
CAF
10-23-2007, 04:22 PM
Nice one Caf...kinda confuzzled me with the three liners...I didn't get it until I read it out loud...hahaha...I feel like I'm having a blond day today...lol
It is naught but a bit of doggerel thrown together. I would not even give the title of prose...

As far as blonde moments go... we all have them LOL
AquaQueen
10-23-2007, 05:13 PM
Oh I know...that;s why I always say blond is an attitude not a hair color, because even a brunette can have a blond moment...at least I know this brunette can and does...A LOT of them!!! Hahaha
CAF
10-23-2007, 05:30 PM
LOL I can understand that!
crackatinny
10-23-2007, 11:03 PM
LOL, you are having Angel withdrawals already.
Lady Hobbs
10-23-2007, 11:26 PM
And my last one:

Did I forget to mention
The surprise they left for me
A spawn I later found
How thrilling can that be?

I never wanted eggs before
But now I'm seeing wiggles
Here we go again, says Hobbs
As she sits back and giggles.
crackatinny
10-23-2007, 11:31 PM
great poem!!!

And great to see you back in action to Adam:19:
CAF
10-23-2007, 11:52 PM
Did I forget to mention
The surprise they left for me
A spawn I later found
How thrilling can that be?

I never wanted eggs before
But now I'm seeing wiggles
Here we go again, says Hobbs
As she sits back and giggles.

Lady Hobbsy found a surprise,
She mourned and pined,
Looking into her tank for angels,
She blurted, "What did I just find?"

"They are round,
They are clear and wiggle.
No it's not Jello
All a jiggle"

She looked around in wonder
for her beloved pets
Her Angels, had left a gift
Before they were shipped off on jets.

So Hobbsy,
What are you going to do?
Now that you have
A tiny little Angel crew?